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One Last Night (repost)
I would
Forsake
All that I have
For a caress
Soft word
Sigh
Lover's touch
One glorious night
One final goodbye
Forsake
All that I have
For a caress
Soft word
Sigh
Lover's touch
One glorious night
One final goodbye
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Copyright @ Her 2022. All rights reserved.
If only I had known it would be the last time I saw you…
If only I had known it would be the last time I saw you…
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Re. One Last Night (repost)
4th Apr 2024 3:00pm
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4th Apr 2024 3:03pm
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4th Apr 2024 3:16pm
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Re. One Last Night (repost)
4th Apr 2024 3:23pm
This, I felt in my bones - I know the feeling.
https://youtu.be/OFNxG0gJJaU > came to mind immediately.
Una Noche Mas (one more night) it's an emotional song...
Couldn't help but sharing it with you - sends hugs.
https://youtu.be/OFNxG0gJJaU > came to mind immediately.
Una Noche Mas (one more night) it's an emotional song...
Couldn't help but sharing it with you - sends hugs.
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4th Apr 2024 7:11pm
One glorious night would never be adequate or enough! You'd always want more I sense; such is the nature of good loving. It's like an addiction. At this rate you might need to remortgage your house! There is a sadness & resignation about this write that does feel truly heartbreaking.
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4th Apr 2024 10:36pm
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4th Apr 2024 10:42pm
One last night will never, it becomes part of your DNA that you live with as a, hopefully, beautiful memory. Hugs and love, Oral
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7th Apr 2024 3:05pm
The biggest eureka moments are sometimes so simple. Like a wooden match being struck, then watching it burn out too soon. We could have lit so much more with it, besides just staring at the flame.
Your write here is an ache, but a lovely one. You captured the feeling perfectly.
Your write here is an ache, but a lovely one. You captured the feeling perfectly.
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Re. One Last Night (repost)
8th Apr 2024 9:49pm
I feel your catharsis from this one, and I think that your poems are incredible in that they unabashedly express your ability to move on from whatever life throws at you! Stay express-y, Her! :)
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