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Sweet Spring
Inspiration blows in on the wind
Open windows welcoming in
The warmth of the gentle breeze
Brings sweet scents for me to breath
Flowers blossom, I see the first few
Daffodils, violets, and magnolias, too
Birdsong chirps across the blue sky
A call I yearn to answer in reply
Optimism, the mood of the season
Gives me yet another good reason
To dig my hands in the dirt and be so grateful
That I am finally one with mother nature
Written by
nightbirdblue
Published 3rd Apr 2024
| Edited 18th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Winner of the “Spring is in the air” comp!
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3rd Apr 2024 6:10pm
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3rd Apr 2024 6:25pm
This is one of the best nature poems I've read in awhile.
The imagery was so vivid.
I loved it!
The imagery was so vivid.
I loved it!
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Anonymous
3rd Apr 2024 8:19pm
Ooh, I WANT this
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3rd Apr 2024 8:30pm
Desperately clinging to the promise of Spring, I’m ready for warmer temps! Thanks for reading me.
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6th May 2024 1:18am
"Brings sweet scents for me to breath(e)". After the rains, I've always loved the way the air feels crisp and cool, like it brings hope.
Nicely spilled.
Nicely spilled.
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6th May 2024 5:46pm
There is an essence of hope in nature isn’t there? Thanks for commenting.