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I Loved A Man
Who was proven unworthy
Filled with such undeniable fury
Who cast me in a mother's role
To which I had so deplored
So he stood there all undressed
Not giving thought to all he kissed her
As though she was nothing but a whore
He made his hand into a fist, shaking it in defiance
Wasn't a lover that he sought
For all the love that he has not
Never crossing his t's or ending
His i's with a dot
I loved a man whose love was fraught
So filled with anger and evil thoughts
This man I loved, I wish I'd not
Filled with such undeniable fury
Who cast me in a mother's role
To which I had so deplored
So he stood there all undressed
Not giving thought to all he kissed her
As though she was nothing but a whore
He made his hand into a fist, shaking it in defiance
Wasn't a lover that he sought
For all the love that he has not
Never crossing his t's or ending
His i's with a dot
I loved a man whose love was fraught
So filled with anger and evil thoughts
This man I loved, I wish I'd not
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Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 12:09pm
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This is a throwback to my only marriage which I am glad is over long time ago! You're a sweetheart, Mary. Thank you for your thoughts and giving me the honor of being on your RL.
Faith
Faith
Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 12:39pm
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3rd Apr 2024 8:40pm
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3rd Apr 2024 2:13pm
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3rd Apr 2024 2:15pm
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3rd Apr 2024 5:04pm
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3rd Apr 2024 5:09pm
Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 2:35pm
I cannot agree more in slightly different ways,
I wish I never loved my ex husband,
actually looking back I don't think I even loved him.
Thank you for sharing your vulnerability,
I'm hoping that relationship is over for you.
Writing it out with empower you. ❤️
I wish I never loved my ex husband,
actually looking back I don't think I even loved him.
Thank you for sharing your vulnerability,
I'm hoping that relationship is over for you.
Writing it out with empower you. ❤️
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Re: Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 6:20pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem! It was my one and only marriage that was over a long time ago. He did some unspeakable things and I am glad it's all in the past.
Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 4:59pm
I hope that you can overcome your fear.. and find someone whom will treat you with more respect!
Sadly beautiful poem.
Sadly beautiful poem.
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Thank you for your kind words. I don't know if I'll ever find the kind of man that I'm looking for.
Faith
Faith
Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 6:06pm
Love is a word that is overused and seldom defined as stone-chiseled. I have loved but one in my life and been blessed with the memories that carve everlasting thoughts. Shame on those who disrespect their vows.
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3rd Apr 2024 6:25pm
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3rd Apr 2024 8:25pm
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3rd Apr 2024 6:57pm
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3rd Apr 2024 8:39pm
Re. I Loved A Man
3rd Apr 2024 8:25pm
your poem delves into the emotions of betrayal, anger, and disappointment, painting a vivid picture of a relationship that caused deep hurt. is a poignant and powerful poem that explores the pain and regret associated with a love that turned out to be unworthy. your pen captures the raw emotions of heartbreak and reflects on the complexities of love and its often painful consequences.
great penned.
great penned.
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Re: Re. I Loved A Man
5th Apr 2024 5:53pm
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4th Apr 2024 10:20pm
Oh, my beautiful friend we've all been there. The past has no power over us only if we use it against ourselves. There's no telling what wonders lie ahead with the power to erase the past hurts. Hugs and love, Oral
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Re: Re. I Loved A Man
5th Apr 2024 6:00pm
Hey, Oral! I have worked out all of that. Got therapy so I could get my power back. I don't hold anything against myself. I forgive him but I can't forget this real part of my past.Faith