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The Ties That Bind
A union blessed by love's orbs
Stirring kisses home to more
Beneath this cotton candy hood
Crimson casts with karma curls
Hordes of glistening torches
Too close to call it's death
Certain figures fastly fading
Honey pot for night's eclipse
Kissed to sleep on feather bed
Awakening a wholesome bliss
Stirring kisses home to more
Beneath this cotton candy hood
Crimson casts with karma curls
Hordes of glistening torches
Too close to call it's death
Certain figures fastly fading
Honey pot for night's eclipse
Kissed to sleep on feather bed
Awakening a wholesome bliss
Published 3rd Apr 2024
Author's Note
This poem was written expressly for Adagio's the "Hooded Horde" competition! Wish me luck, please!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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3rd Apr 2024 11:51am
3rd Apr 2024 8:27pm
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- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
3rd Apr 2024 12:08pm
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3rd Apr 2024 8:28pm
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3rd Apr 2024 2:12pm
3rd Apr 2024 8:30pm
3rd Apr 2024 8:23pm
is a beautifully evocative poem that explores the enchanting power of love and the deep connections it creates. your poem takes a turn towards a more serene and contented tone with the mention of awakening to a wholesome bliss and being kissed to sleep on a feather bed. you captures the essence of love's transformative and comforting nature, offering a glimpse into a world of beauty and fulfillment. Nicely writing.
5th Apr 2024 1:57pm
You always say the nicest things! I love how you give such thought into critiques. You are great at getting the meaning of my poems and I thank you
Faith
Faith
3rd Apr 2024 10:17pm
5th Apr 2024 1:59pm
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5th Apr 2024 1:53pm
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. I appreciate your good wishes as well.
Faith
Faith
8th Apr 2024 4:40am
Dear F,
Stirring and passionate piece. So much imagery even without the colors and design of the picture. The undercurrent of desire between two people was ever present and expressed so elegantly. I wish you all the best in this comp. Awesome write.
H🌷
Stirring and passionate piece. So much imagery even without the colors and design of the picture. The undercurrent of desire between two people was ever present and expressed so elegantly. I wish you all the best in this comp. Awesome write.
H🌷
