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The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
Lifeless memories.
Ones that are dead yet linger.
With their haunted groan.
Ones that are dead yet linger.
With their haunted groan.
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Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
2nd Apr 2024 11:41am
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2nd Apr 2024 11:47am
Thank you.
I was trying to write a poem on memory loss
and took the easy way out with a haiku, lol
I'm so happy you liked it.
I was trying to write a poem on memory loss
and took the easy way out with a haiku, lol
I'm so happy you liked it.
Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
2nd Apr 2024 11:43am
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2nd Apr 2024 11:48am
Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
2nd Apr 2024 11:49am
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2nd Apr 2024 12:00pm
Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
2nd Apr 2024 3:13pm
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2nd Apr 2024 3:23pm
Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
2nd Apr 2024 8:30pm
The contrast between the mind and the heart adds depth to your poem, suggesting that while the mind may forget and let go of certain memories, the heart holds onto them, their presence lingering like ghostly echoes. you evokes a sense of poignant reflection on the nature of memories.
you invites us contemplation on the lasting impact of past experiences and the enduring power of the heart's connection to them. Nicely penned.
you invites us contemplation on the lasting impact of past experiences and the enduring power of the heart's connection to them. Nicely penned.
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Re: Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
2nd Apr 2024 8:35pm
Thank you so much, I really enjoyed your comment.
You totally got what I was expressing.
You totally got what I was expressing.
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2nd Apr 2024 8:37pm
Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
3rd Apr 2024 4:06am
Dear D,
You definitely have a developing knack for this style of poetry. Absolutely lovely. Makes me think even though the wires of mind may get crossed the heart won’t and those memories are stored there eternally. Great writing. H🌷
You definitely have a developing knack for this style of poetry. Absolutely lovely. Makes me think even though the wires of mind may get crossed the heart won’t and those memories are stored there eternally. Great writing. H🌷
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Re: Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
3rd Apr 2024 8:03am
I love what you said about memories being stored in the heart eternally.
Thx for stopping bye and the really nice comments.
I do like writing these haiku's, I didn't think I would, but I do.
Thx for stopping bye and the really nice comments.
I do like writing these haiku's, I didn't think I would, but I do.
Re. The Mind Forgets, The Heart Remembers
3rd Apr 2024 4:09am
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