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Disappointment
you have left me
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you have left me
hours barely passed,
such fleeted body,
you ravaged
the jeweled fields,
and made your choice
Written by
wolfatthedoor1966
Published
2nd Apr 2024
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#breakup
#deception
#disappointment
#secrets
#support
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Re. you have left me
Honoria
2nd Apr 2024 10:10am
Dear J,
This is painful to me. Breakups and heart ache are forever etched in the heart. Palpable. H🌷
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wolfatthedoor1966
2nd Apr 2024 10:15am
thank you Honoria
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Thor_Azine
2nd Apr 2024 11:44am
Captured the pain poetically
Nicely done
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wolfatthedoor1966
2nd Apr 2024 1:31pm
thank you Thor
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nightbirdblue
2nd Apr 2024 2:13pm
There’s a clandestine element to this, foraged through the pain.
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wolfatthedoor1966
2nd Apr 2024 3:14pm
thank you bird
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Re. you have left me
Marks
2nd Apr 2024 11:44pm
That kind of situation is desvastating.
...
That handful of words prefectly creates a void... A deep breathless void.
...
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Re: Re. you have left me
wolfatthedoor1966
2nd Apr 2024 11:52pm
thank you Marks
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Re: Re. you have left me
Marks
3rd Apr 2024 2:42pm
You're welcome, wolfatthedoor1966.
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