Sails the Lonely Ship

I think this your best post.
Read like rich poetry.
Loved it!

Thank you very much Debbie. Glad you liked this.

Quite the image on that 2nd verse.  Awesome poem.

LJ

Hello LJ,

Hope all is well. Thank you so much for the read & comment.

Keith

I agree with Debbie - this really does have a poetic feel to it.  The transitioning theme and emotions really build meaning and questions of morality.  I like how it's pieced together, and how it unfolds as almost a story, yet has that particular narrative of a poem.  Thanks for sharing.

Glad you enjoyed this poem. I really appreciate your feedback & comments. Thank you.

Crying out yet somewhat stoic in its plight, definitely a strong poem here.

Thank you Thor. I greatly appreciate this.