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Candyshop
i'll take you to
the candy shop
i'll let you lick
the lollipop
...
Oh Henry,
let me blow
your pops
pop your
rocks until
your cherry
drops, make
your fizz balls
razzle & twizzle
sky your bars
from the milky
way to mars
chick-o-stick
your liquorice
watchamacallit
let me fun your
dips, red hots
milk duds, dots
-and popsicle-
yes Mr Goodbar
i am a smartie
gonna margot
your rolo, skittle
your snicker, twix
your toblerone
and make your
tootsie pop drop
welcome to the
kit kat candy shop
the candy shop
i'll let you lick
the lollipop
...
Oh Henry,
let me blow
your pops
pop your
rocks until
your cherry
drops, make
your fizz balls
razzle & twizzle
sky your bars
from the milky
way to mars
chick-o-stick
your liquorice
watchamacallit
let me fun your
dips, red hots
milk duds, dots
-and popsicle-
yes Mr Goodbar
i am a smartie
gonna margot
your rolo, skittle
your snicker, twix
your toblerone
and make your
tootsie pop drop
welcome to the
kit kat candy shop
Author's Note
Oh Henry is a candy bar.
...writing this was bliss...
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Re: Re. Candyshop
30th Mar 2024 3:20pm
Re. Candyshop
30th Mar 2024 2:38pm
OMG.. I love it!! I remember those candies (oops.. maybe I shouldn't be saying that here) 😉
Cool poem!! Makes me want to go with you..
Cool poem!! Makes me want to go with you..
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Re: Re. Candyshop
30th Mar 2024 3:21pm
What an enthusiastic comment, thanks heaps! You Americans have to most awesome names for candies and it was a joy to work with them :-)
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30th Mar 2024 3:24pm
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Re. Candyshop
30th Mar 2024 4:44pm
Omg! I was giddy reading this! Love the puns, tongue in cheek, cheeky play with words in this. So many candies in it! Well done, sis!
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Re: Re. Candyshop
31st Mar 2024 10:08am
Aww, thank you so very much, big sis 💕
I had so much fun with this one, it was a joy to write.
I had so much fun with this one, it was a joy to write.
Re. Candyshop
30th Mar 2024 5:50pm
Hahaha, never was really big on candies, didn't recognize all of the names. But we can appreciate such tasty poetry, tight work
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31st Mar 2024 10:08am
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31st Mar 2024 10:15am
We are not a fan of the candy purchased in a candy shop, but a fiend for the two legged kind
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31st Mar 2024 10:30am
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Re. Candyshop
31st Mar 2024 9:01am
Dear D,
Clever beyond measure. I will never have another Blow Pop without wondering how many licks it will take to get to his center…I mean THE center. 😉
Fab write. H🌷
Clever beyond measure. I will never have another Blow Pop without wondering how many licks it will take to get to his center…I mean THE center. 😉
Fab write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Candyshop
31st Mar 2024 10:13am
Clever beyond measure, I can't ask for more. Especially coming from such a talented poetess as you are. And yes, of course it's THE centre. Enjoy your blow pops ;-)
Thanks heaps H 💕
Thanks heaps H 💕
Re. Candyshop
31st Mar 2024 1:32pm
And now I have a craving. Ingenious poem. Maybe you'll get a call from Mars, Hershey or Nestle's marketing department to come up with a sales pitch! LOL.
Made me smile.
Made me smile.
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Re: Re. Candyshop
31st Mar 2024 1:50pm
You made me smile big time with your sales pitch :-)
Thanks heaps for your visit and calling this one ingenious.
Thanks heaps for your visit and calling this one ingenious.