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Too good to be true

Too good to be true
 
You say you really want me and your hunger growing fast, if I give myself to you I wonder how long we're gonna last
 
I'm willing to give my heart to you but I'm in fear it might get broke, I know you seem so much kinder than any other bloke
 
Caring and considerate you treat me with such a great respect, it's so strange to feel important, it's something I never did expect
 
When I talk you listen, you give me room so I can grow, if I'm not sure of something we discuss it and take things nice and slow
 
When we walk out you hold my hand, you make me feel so proud, you always express your feelings to me, they're always plain and loud
 
You are the man I dreamed of you've made all my hopes come true, you've given me such hope and strength and its all because of you
 
So you wonder why I'm still fearful why I struggle to submit to you, it's because you seem so perfect, are you to good to be true
 
Ron
Written by averageJoe69 (Ron Summers)
Published | Edited 29th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Self doubt
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