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Secret Stream
Even with the departure of a defeated winter.
Spring's backstage feeling very conceited.
Bare branches still bend in their naked contortion.
With blatant desire for lush summer leaves fortune.
The trees whispered their longing
telepathically to the breeze.
The stream was a mysterious gold, green & brown.
Translucent was the elder boulder ground.
The drapes of hemlock need no announcing sound.
Below rock bottom, is a hardly reached equation.
A survival where peace is the eternal sum.
The secret stream will restore your inner gleam.
Spring's backstage feeling very conceited.
Bare branches still bend in their naked contortion.
With blatant desire for lush summer leaves fortune.
The trees whispered their longing
telepathically to the breeze.
The stream was a mysterious gold, green & brown.
Translucent was the elder boulder ground.
The drapes of hemlock need no announcing sound.
Below rock bottom, is a hardly reached equation.
A survival where peace is the eternal sum.
The secret stream will restore your inner gleam.
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Re. Secret Stream
27th Mar 2024 12:31pm
A beautiful place for all to go. Your poem captivates and mesmerizes my inner soul. Beautiful.
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27th Mar 2024 12:34pm
Thank you, that was such a a nice comment.
Nature is waiting for us all to find peace
Nature is waiting for us all to find peace
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27th Mar 2024 3:09pm
I know you love nature as much as me, thank you so much for your kind comments!
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Anonymous
27th Mar 2024 3:04pm
I WANT that!
This is exquisite, girl.
This is exquisite, girl.
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27th Mar 2024 3:08pm
I want it too! Thank you.
These were my thoughts from my walk in the woods yesterday.
These were my thoughts from my walk in the woods yesterday.
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27th Mar 2024 4:59pm
The perfect celebration of nature! I love nature. My spirituality is weaved through with it. Love your poem.
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27th Mar 2024 5:35pm
So restorative this is.
Thank you for posting, Debbie
Your are a poetess extraordinaire.
Thank you for posting, Debbie
Your are a poetess extraordinaire.
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27th Mar 2024 7:27pm
Thank you for such a nice comment.
It felt restorative to write.
And it was true - my day
It felt restorative to write.
And it was true - my day
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27th Mar 2024 6:00pm
Sounds like a place where I can meditate and
commune with nature..
What a lovely vibe , Debbie
commune with nature..
What a lovely vibe , Debbie
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27th Mar 2024 7:28pm
Aww thank you, that means so much.
I love your writing, I'm always pleased to see you.
I love your writing, I'm always pleased to see you.
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2024 12:21pm
This was wholly uplifting & rejuvenating. Beautiful!
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29th Mar 2024 12:23pm