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a gift
do not
bring
yourself as
a gift
to me,
give me
the chance
to
unwrap you,
then take
it back.
bring
yourself as
a gift
to me,
give me
the chance
to
unwrap you,
then take
it back.
Published 27th Mar 2024
| Edited 28th Mar 2024
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27th Mar 2024 10:15am
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27th Mar 2024 10:17am
It’s seems anger is lying around in there as well. Enjoyed this to-the-point poem.
27th Mar 2024 10:22am
This is my kind of poem! I especially love it's simplicity (meant in the best way possible) and it's brevity. It's powerful delivery is undeniable. A fine poem!
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