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if i could see you again *
if i
could see
you again
for the
first time,
two people
broken
somewhere
then proceed,
starving,
in her
white
cotton dress,
feeling it
against
her ankles,
when i
come home.
could see
you again
for the
first time,
two people
broken
somewhere
then proceed,
starving,
in her
white
cotton dress,
feeling it
against
her ankles,
when i
come home.
Published 26th Mar 2024
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26th Mar 2024 8:18pm
I can really visualize the feel of the dress and the longing in this poem wolf!
26th Mar 2024 8:38pm
27th Mar 2024 11:06am
This is very beautifully expressed. There is nothing to not like about your poem. Great work!
27th Mar 2024 11:38am
27th Mar 2024 11:46am
