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Sometimes I Still Wonder
I still wonder
How it would feel
To have my dreams
Suddenly go my way
How life would be
Had you decided to stay
What it would be like
To wake up every day
In your arms
How it would feel
To be protected
From the world’s harm
The laughter you gave
Filled the hole
In my heart
I somehow managed
To survive when
You said we had to part
The roller coaster
Has stopped
My emotions have calmed
I no longer envision
A poem
Requesting a response
I know you may
Not want me too
But I do
I just miss you
It’s true
How it would feel
To have my dreams
Suddenly go my way
How life would be
Had you decided to stay
What it would be like
To wake up every day
In your arms
How it would feel
To be protected
From the world’s harm
The laughter you gave
Filled the hole
In my heart
I somehow managed
To survive when
You said we had to part
The roller coaster
Has stopped
My emotions have calmed
I no longer envision
A poem
Requesting a response
I know you may
Not want me too
But I do
I just miss you
It’s true
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Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
25th Mar 2024 12:10pm
Re: Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
26th Mar 2024 5:36am
I’m still working at letting go completely, but he may be the first that I’ll hold onto just for the smile regardless of what happened.
Thank you, girl.
Thank you, girl.
Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
25th Mar 2024 2:03pm
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26th Mar 2024 5:37am
Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
25th Mar 2024 2:44pm
Honesty & vulnerability in tandem here. I used to spend a lot of time on wondering but I had to stop. It was earing too much focus & too much of my energy. Sending you hugs...
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Re: Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
26th Mar 2024 5:39am
With him it’s not as draining as it’s been in the past. I’ve chosen to concentrate on the positive aspects and it’s made a huge difference.
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25th Mar 2024 3:55pm
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Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
25th Mar 2024 6:21pm
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26th Mar 2024 5:40am
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You have definitely got my support always. You're one of my most favored friends on here. I think you're a fabulous poetess!
P.S. Your illustration for this poem is perfect!
P.S. Your illustration for this poem is perfect!
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Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
25th Mar 2024 7:59pm
This is so overwhelmingly relatable. ❤️
It made my heart ache.
Except, in my story, I was the one who ran first. 😭
I know exactly how you feel when you say:
"My emotions have calmed
I no longer envision
A poem
Requesting a response
I know you may
Not want me too
But I do
I just miss you"
It made my heart ache.
Except, in my story, I was the one who ran first. 😭
I know exactly how you feel when you say:
"My emotions have calmed
I no longer envision
A poem
Requesting a response
I know you may
Not want me too
But I do
I just miss you"
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Re: Re. Sometimes I Still Wonder
26th Mar 2024 5:42am
Heartache is heartache regardless of who left.
Thank you for the RL add, PS.
Holding you in thought.
Thank you for the RL add, PS.
Holding you in thought.