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carried away
Lets get
ourselves
carried away
in
oceanic bliss
lets
float effortlessly
upon
marine waves
that
will pull
us
down if
struggling
to get
carried
away, love.
ourselves
carried away
in
oceanic bliss
lets
float effortlessly
upon
marine waves
that
will pull
us
down if
struggling
to get
carried
away, love.
Published 24th Mar 2024
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24th Mar 2024 10:09pm
Beautiful. The visual, the wording and the message. Let's go together!!!!!
24th Mar 2024 10:10pm
24th Mar 2024 10:41pm
I don't like the ocean since it tried to drown me in Malibu at twelve but the pic is nice.
24th Mar 2024 10:45pm
Oof damn, thats awful. Similarly to Malibu this pic was taken in another popular place: Miami
25th Mar 2024 3:13am
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