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and i sat
waiting,
hoping,
one
more day,
from darkness
to trade
with
that bright
sun,
to trade
stories,
to laugh
at each
other's jokes,
to see
how long
i can wait.
hoping,
one
more day,
from darkness
to trade
with
that bright
sun,
to trade
stories,
to laugh
at each
other's jokes,
to see
how long
i can wait.
Published 21st Mar 2024
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21st Mar 2024 7:41am
Dear J,
I enjoyed the anticipation in this piece. Sweet and playful and hopeful all in one. H🌷
I enjoyed the anticipation in this piece. Sweet and playful and hopeful all in one. H🌷
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23rd Mar 2024 4:44am
It makes me think of waiting in the dark, for a beam of hopeful light (or for someone that will light up the room).
It makes me feel a bit lonely. 🙁
Your writing style is nice ❤️
It makes me feel a bit lonely. 🙁
Your writing style is nice ❤️
23rd Mar 2024 4:47am
