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Onzijnen

Another Dutch/English one:  
 
Er is veel eer gerelateerd geweld  
Tegen Syrische vrouwen en meisjes  
Mogelijk ook nog femicide  
 
Toch nog sex toerisme reisjes?  
Thailand spant de kroon - klinkt morbide  
Hoe je als man munt uit hun kruis kunt slaan  
 
Het uithuwelijken is bonafide  
Gegadigden komen te voet en gaan  
Pijlsnel als ze horen hoeveel geld…..  
 
Beschaving komt al gauw in het nauw  
Wie neemt het op voor de Syrische vrouw  
W9jan2024  
 
 
There is a lot of honor-related violence  
Against Syrian women and girls  
Possibly femicide as well  
 
Still sex tourism trips?  
Thailand takes the lead - sounds morbid  
How men can capitalize on their crotch  
 
Marrying them off is bona fide  
Prospects come and on foot and go  
Real quick when they hear how much money…..  
 
Civilization is soon in dire straits  
Who stands up for the Syrian woman  
W9jan2024  
 
 
Hope you’ll like it!  
Kind regards, Gus  
 
 
The verse form requires a adjusted rhyme:  
 
A  
B  
C  
 
B  
C  
D  
 
C  
D  
A  
 
And a distichon to end it all  
E  
E  
 
Onzijnen have  
3 verses of three lines  
And a distichon which is two lines  
 
 
Want to try and write one? @Green_Arrow?
Written by JiltedJohnny
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Author's Note
What goes for Syrian women, goes for Indian women too…

What I should have entered is empathy of course. But everyone has a mother. Empathy is impossible at DUP???
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