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Where Are You?
I know you're out there,
Maybe reading my words,
I feel your heart missing mine,
Even if your voice, I've never heard.
There has to be something more,
A heart that gets mine,
So I sit here waiting,
In the darkness of the night.
I look for you blindly,
In every eye that catches mine,
But you're never there,
Your spark of madness, I cannot find.
Please come find me,
Before my light disappears completely,
It is all but gone,
Soon to be lost in eternity.
Maybe reading my words,
I feel your heart missing mine,
Even if your voice, I've never heard.
There has to be something more,
A heart that gets mine,
So I sit here waiting,
In the darkness of the night.
I look for you blindly,
In every eye that catches mine,
But you're never there,
Your spark of madness, I cannot find.
Please come find me,
Before my light disappears completely,
It is all but gone,
Soon to be lost in eternity.
Author's Note
I need a soul mate...a heart mate.
If it's just friends, that's much better, actually.
But, alas, no one exists.
If it's just friends, that's much better, actually.
But, alas, no one exists.
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Re. Where Are You?
19th Mar 2024 7:27am
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20th Mar 2024 9:16pm
Re. Where Are You?
19th Mar 2024 9:40am
Dear PS,
I appreciate this piece for its prayer-like quality and human need for connection. The formatting makes it flow and the poignancy makes it heartfelt. I think when you put your wants into the atmosphere things begin to change. Great write. H🌷
I appreciate this piece for its prayer-like quality and human need for connection. The formatting makes it flow and the poignancy makes it heartfelt. I think when you put your wants into the atmosphere things begin to change. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Where Are You?
20th Mar 2024 9:19pm
Thank you, H!
I'm putting it in the atmosphere, hoping you're right. ❤️
It's hard never being alone...while feeling hopelessly lonely.
I'm putting it in the atmosphere, hoping you're right. ❤️
It's hard never being alone...while feeling hopelessly lonely.
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20th Mar 2024 9:20pm
Re. Where Are You?
19th Mar 2024 12:49pm
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Maybe that's it, actually.
Even if someone existed right in front of me...I'd probably be too busy looking for reasons to prove they couldn't be.
I've found I generally assume "everyone leaves", so I do my best (intentionally or not) to show them the door.
Sucks when I really like them, though.
Ha! That train of thought made me think of this song:
https://youtu.be/mYihoBDIRj4?si=MBN2AYZtB4G6f7E0
Even if someone existed right in front of me...I'd probably be too busy looking for reasons to prove they couldn't be.
I've found I generally assume "everyone leaves", so I do my best (intentionally or not) to show them the door.
Sucks when I really like them, though.
Ha! That train of thought made me think of this song:
https://youtu.be/mYihoBDIRj4?si=MBN2AYZtB4G6f7E0
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21st Mar 2024 00:38am
Maybe you just need to relax. I know you're competitive, lol, but success always lies within the middle ground, in the give & take & the compromise. Sadly, there's no such thing as perfection because this is it! 😊
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21st Mar 2024 1:39am
I am competitive, very, how did you know that?!😳
...but, it's more like narrow-focused "passion".
And I love to play, and be snarky, and ponder, and imagine, and I hate to be told what to do. 😝
...but, it's more like narrow-focused "passion".
And I love to play, and be snarky, and ponder, and imagine, and I hate to be told what to do. 😝
Re. Where Are You?
20th Mar 2024 9:54pm
If there was a theme tag for #longing, this would be the poster poem for it! I definitely feel this one. Real relationships are hard.
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Re. Where Are You?
25th Mar 2024 9:11pm
I echo the comments of Broken Titanium and Honoria. The longing is palpable.
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25th Mar 2024 9:59pm
It is a longing that consumes my thoughts like fire.
Thank you, Solomon Song. ❤️
Thank you, Solomon Song. ❤️