deepundergroundpoetry.com
Vast
Yes-I guess
My past
Twas a vast
&
Endless lost highway
Where I made
My way
Through broken
beams
of
light: Characterizing
The day
An ache of heart-break
Maybe that’s
why
I
cry
What would you think of me
?
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
My past
Twas a vast
&
Endless lost highway
Where I made
My way
Through broken
beams
of
light: Characterizing
The day
An ache of heart-break
Maybe that’s
why
I
cry
What would you think of me
?
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
Published 17th Mar 2024
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 0
comments 2
reads 124
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
17th Mar 2024 7:20am
Dear CO,
Beauty of a write. Heart melting and so personal a write. It was easy to place myself in that mindset especially with your closing line. Lovely piece. H🌷
Beauty of a write. Heart melting and so personal a write. It was easy to place myself in that mindset especially with your closing line. Lovely piece. H🌷
17th Mar 2024 12:07pm
