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Pretty Violence
I only
Want you
When
Your
Vengeance
Soothes
When
My
Willingness
Burns
When
I’m covered
In your
Redemption
And my
Mascara
Stained
Tears
Match
My
Smile
Want you
When
Your
Vengeance
Soothes
When
My
Willingness
Burns
When
I’m covered
In your
Redemption
And my
Mascara
Stained
Tears
Match
My
Smile
Author's Note
Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
Thank you PoetSpeak for the title and prompt
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Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 2:06am
Honor
Sacrifice
Stained redemption
Power, vulnerability and slither
BIG LIKE
Sacrifice
Stained redemption
Power, vulnerability and slither
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 3:03am
Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 2:57am
Actually, this can be read on several levels which, for me, is indicative of a good poem. A poem without mystery is like a beer without the fizz, flat, dull and unremarkable. This is anything but flat. Well done.
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Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 7:10am
Hoi hoi
Out of this world beautiful poem.
I agree
With mrd
Which in itself could be a poem
But I only wrote it for fun
But I mean it
Is that possible?
My admiration of your talent knows no end.
Kind regards, Gus
Out of this world beautiful poem.
I agree
With mrd
Which in itself could be a poem
But I only wrote it for fun
But I mean it
Is that possible?
My admiration of your talent knows no end.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 1:07pm
Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 9:13am
Oooh I like this one.
Covered in your redemption - crazy good!!
I like pretty violence too, lol
Covered in your redemption - crazy good!!
I like pretty violence too, lol
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Re: Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 1:08pm
Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 10:38am
Cool description of the poem with the title. Like the overall vibe & the image. Killer stuff!!
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Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 12:19pm
Contradictory concepts creating a gestalt in the end.
Well done Her.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well done Her.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. Pretty Violence
17th Mar 2024 3:02pm