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A New Season
Winter suddenly hides away
waterfalls once frozen
flowing downward into the bay
Lonely sidewalks decay, after before
suddenly spring has arrived
the end of the bridge lies an open door
Broken dreams picked up where they last fell
the emotional wasteland sleeps again
my love through words, encouraged to tell
waterfalls once frozen
flowing downward into the bay
Lonely sidewalks decay, after before
suddenly spring has arrived
the end of the bridge lies an open door
Broken dreams picked up where they last fell
the emotional wasteland sleeps again
my love through words, encouraged to tell
Published 14th Mar 2024
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14th Mar 2024 12:02pm
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14th Mar 2024 12:07pm
14th Mar 2024 1:16pm
14th Mar 2024 1:27pm
14th Mar 2024 1:45pm
Every day is special, some more than others. Great reminder. Hugs and love, Oral
14th Mar 2024 4:20pm
14th Mar 2024 2:47pm
So, I expected the usual, you pulling the rug out from under me with a dark twist.
And look at you twisting it up without one this time.
Beautiful.
And look at you twisting it up without one this time.
Beautiful.
14th Mar 2024 4:21pm
14th Mar 2024 4:38pm
You really got something going on with this format of expression. It's short, neat, tidy, and clean, but packs a punch, in terms directing attention in transition. I really like the last stanza - said like a poet, heh. Anyway, thanks for sharing!
14th Mar 2024 4:54pm
Greetings Connotation,
Thank you for the feedback. I'm trying to keep some of my poems a much shorter length as of late. Easier for me to focus and also not to get to lengthy and bored with it. Glad you liked it.
Thank you for the feedback. I'm trying to keep some of my poems a much shorter length as of late. Easier for me to focus and also not to get to lengthy and bored with it. Glad you liked it.
