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Daze Dreaming
You can try & scream for change
Higher officials suck
Day to day life drains you dry
Nobody gives two fucks!
Professional Castigation
A disbelieving eye
Drug Free America won’t occur
Supply & demand until you die
People here are dazed
Epidemic of handling life
Drunk to remember tomorrow
Buried five feet under tonight
Higher officials suck
Day to day life drains you dry
Nobody gives two fucks!
Professional Castigation
A disbelieving eye
Drug Free America won’t occur
Supply & demand until you die
People here are dazed
Epidemic of handling life
Drunk to remember tomorrow
Buried five feet under tonight
Published 14th Mar 2024
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2024 11:59am
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14th Mar 2024 12:00pm
14th Mar 2024 1:19pm
People are dazed with themselves, not what goes on in the world.
Me, me, me society.
Well written.
Me, me, me society.
Well written.
14th Mar 2024 1:27pm
14th Mar 2024 4:34pm
I like how surprisingly catchy this is, as well as original. I can personally relate to the subject matter, as I'm a recovering addict. I like the supply and demand line, as well as the 5 feet under line. This could definitely have potential to be worked on to become metal lyrics - easily. Anyway, overall, a good read from my point of view. Thanks for sharing, and take care.
14th Mar 2024 4:57pm
Happy to hear that your a recovering addict. Stay strong my friend. I love metal! Glad you enjoyed the poem and for giving me some excellent feedback.
Keith
Keith
