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This Is What He Saw On The Beach
David saw Lisa
wearing the micro
bikini he gave her
for her birthday.
wearing the micro
bikini he gave her
for her birthday.
Published 13th Mar 2024
Author's Note
This free verse poem is about what it is that one person has seen a friend wearing on a local beach.
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13th Mar 2024 7:16pm
I might have interpreted the poem as being that the bikini he bought her had shrunk in the water while she happily did not notice.
13th Mar 2024 9:29pm
