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She is Me
she didn't leave
or fade away
she stayed
she's not
my identity
yet part of
the package
called Dee
she's my
morphine
cocaine
special k
pain killer
& void filler
the mistress
slowly she
chokes the
life out of me
killing me softly
please, set me free
or fade away
she stayed
she's not
my identity
yet part of
the package
called Dee
she's my
morphine
cocaine
special k
pain killer
& void filler
the mistress
slowly she
chokes the
life out of me
killing me softly
please, set me free
Author's Note
The struggles continues.
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Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 1:28pm
"she's not
my identity
yet part of
the package"
If we were all so honest with ourselves on who we are & what comprises our entirety. And recognize that what we struggle with is not who we are...but part of what affects us. Amazing, little sister, open & honest & powerful
my identity
yet part of
the package"
If we were all so honest with ourselves on who we are & what comprises our entirety. And recognize that what we struggle with is not who we are...but part of what affects us. Amazing, little sister, open & honest & powerful
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Re: Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 1:58pm
So true, my dearest sister.
That's why you should never say: I am depressed, but I'm going through a depression. Thanks heaps for seeing the honesty of this piece.
That's why you should never say: I am depressed, but I'm going through a depression. Thanks heaps for seeing the honesty of this piece.
Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 1:36pm
I respect the raw truthfulness of this write. I’m fortunate to have you in my updates feed.
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Re: Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 1:58pm
Thank you so much, Her. That you're fortunate to have me in your updates feed, made me a bit speechless - honored by it.
Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 1:44pm
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12th Mar 2024 1:58pm
Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 2:17pm
Hoi hoi
Nice write, nice artwork!
Do I like this poem? I love it.
Keep up the stamina.
Kind regards, Gus
Nice write, nice artwork!
Do I like this poem? I love it.
Keep up the stamina.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 2:31pm
Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 2:40pm
This is a standing naked in Times Square moment. Thinking you'd be alone but upon observation others appear on the landscape.
Bravo to your courage to admit the struggle....
BIG
Bravo to your courage to admit the struggle....
BIG
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Re: Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 2:48pm
I've written about it before, but it remains vulnerable. And naked.
Thanks heaps, Mr PoetSpeak.
Thanks heaps, Mr PoetSpeak.
Re. She is Me
12th Mar 2024 3:42pm
To quote yourself
'' That's why you should never say: I am depressed, but I'm going through a depression.''
Well said.
Glad to see you back, Duende
Your work is always inspiring
Much respect
Naaj
'' That's why you should never say: I am depressed, but I'm going through a depression.''
Well said.
Glad to see you back, Duende
Your work is always inspiring
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. She is Me
13th Mar 2024 9:14am
It's good to be back, Naaj, and great to see you on my page :-)
To be called inspiring is a huge compliment, especially coming from a poet I admire a lot.
Thanks heaps, Duende
To be called inspiring is a huge compliment, especially coming from a poet I admire a lot.
Thanks heaps, Duende
Re. She is Me
13th Mar 2024 12:49pm
Sending you loads of love, light, and strength to overcome and control the beast, Duende. Thank you for sharing your vulnerability. xo
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13th Mar 2024 2:26pm
Re. She is Me
13th Mar 2024 2:33pm
Raw and honest, I really enjoyed how you put this together. Sending you my best whishes.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. She is Me
13th Mar 2024 2:42pm
Glad you enjoyed how I put this together.
Thanks for your words, the wishes and taking her home.
Thanks for your words, the wishes and taking her home.
Re. She is Me
15th Mar 2024 3:57am
Dear D,
Difficult subject on which to comment and yet I was compelled to read and re read it for its sheer power. Afflicted similarly this poem is particularly meaningful. Fantastic writing. H🌷
Difficult subject on which to comment and yet I was compelled to read and re read it for its sheer power. Afflicted similarly this poem is particularly meaningful. Fantastic writing. H🌷
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Re: Re. She is Me
Dear H.
Subjects like this are vulnerable to post and I can imagine difficult to comment on.
I appreciate you for commenting on this piece anyway.
Fantastic is a huge compliment, especially coming from a talented Poetess as you are 💕
Thanks heaps, D.
Subjects like this are vulnerable to post and I can imagine difficult to comment on.
I appreciate you for commenting on this piece anyway.
Fantastic is a huge compliment, especially coming from a talented Poetess as you are 💕
Thanks heaps, D.
Re. She is Me
16th Apr 2024 4:48pm
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