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Rising Beyond the Storm
In the quiet, I stand tall, observant,
Watching the play of shadows and light.
Amazed not by grandeur but resilience,
As I navigate through day and night.
You, a storm, sought to destroy,
Preaching love while sowing despair.
True love uplifts, it doesn’t shatter,
A truth I’ve learned, as I breathe fresh air.
From one to another, you leap, leaving scars,
Spinning tales that the wind erases.
But the pattern reveals more about you,
A mirror to your own broken places.
In gratitude, I find my power,
Escaping the shadows, into the sun I step.
My dreams, now clear, are my tower,
From your grasp, into my own depth.
May you find peace in your solitude,
And learn that love begins within.
Break the cycle, with fortitude,
Embrace your worth, let healing begin.
Watching the play of shadows and light.
Amazed not by grandeur but resilience,
As I navigate through day and night.
You, a storm, sought to destroy,
Preaching love while sowing despair.
True love uplifts, it doesn’t shatter,
A truth I’ve learned, as I breathe fresh air.
From one to another, you leap, leaving scars,
Spinning tales that the wind erases.
But the pattern reveals more about you,
A mirror to your own broken places.
In gratitude, I find my power,
Escaping the shadows, into the sun I step.
My dreams, now clear, are my tower,
From your grasp, into my own depth.
May you find peace in your solitude,
And learn that love begins within.
Break the cycle, with fortitude,
Embrace your worth, let healing begin.
Published 12th Mar 2024
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23rd Mar 2024 5:09pm
This poem beautifully captures the journey of resilience and self-discovery in the face of adversity. The imagery of standing tall amidst shadows and light, and finding strength in the aftermath of a destructive storm, resonates deeply with the theme of overcoming challenges.
The contrast between the destructive force of the storm and the healing power of self-love is striking. The speaker's realization that true love uplifts rather than shatters is a poignant reflection on the importance of healthy relationships.
The poem also touches on the idea of introspection and personal growth, suggesting that understanding one's own vulnerabilities and brokenness can lead to greater empathy and compassion for others.
Overall, "Rising Beyond the Storm" is a moving testament to the resilience of the human spirit and the transformative power of self-love and healing.
24th Mar 2024 10:17pm
Dear ms_kitty,
Thank you so much for your heartfelt words and the beautiful poem you shared with me. Your creativity and expression truly resonated with me, and I appreciate the energy you put into it.
I'd love to connect with you further and continue our conversation. Would you be open to becoming friends on Facebook? I believe we could have some meaningful exchanges and perhaps even collaborate creatively in the future.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Warm regards,
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