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Black Velveteen
let me velvet, velour
& wool you & voile
you in nylon love
let me brocade
bouclé & batiste
you & sateen you
in fields of chenille
i’ll fleece & zephyr
you in shades of
chiffon, cashmere
and crèpe de chine
i’ll bombarzine you
in organza whispers
in bobbinet wishes
& fishnet delight
in silken nights
shantung sighs
crinoline blisses
& zibeline heights
i’ll marquisette you
neoprene & plissé you
mousseline & lamé you
(persuade you in latex)
i’ll flannel & lace you
teddy & suede you
till you grenadine to
the zorbeez of duende
& wool you & voile
you in nylon love
let me brocade
bouclé & batiste
you & sateen you
in fields of chenille
i’ll fleece & zephyr
you in shades of
chiffon, cashmere
and crèpe de chine
i’ll bombarzine you
in organza whispers
in bobbinet wishes
& fishnet delight
in silken nights
shantung sighs
crinoline blisses
& zibeline heights
i’ll marquisette you
neoprene & plissé you
mousseline & lamé you
(persuade you in latex)
i’ll flannel & lace you
teddy & suede you
till you grenadine to
the zorbeez of duende
Author's Note
Oldie * Velvet - a rewrite.
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Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 2:04pm
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8th Mar 2024 2:08pm
Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 3:51pm
As a sewing person, I enjoyed immensely seeing the use of all textiles. So good to see your words again!
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8th Mar 2024 6:28pm
So happy to hear you enjoyed the texitiles, especiallly since you're a sewing person.
Thanks for the welcome back :-)
Thanks for the welcome back :-)
Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 3:54pm
Welcome back, Goddess! So good to see you here! xo
Love what you've done with this rewrite.
Love what you've done with this rewrite.
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Re: Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 6:28pm
Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 4:11pm
Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 6:27pm
French and English coexist in a fine design where poetry array makes them look like words.
Love your presentation in verse.
Love your presentation in verse.
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9th Mar 2024 6:30am
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Re: Re. Black Velveteen
9th Mar 2024 6:32am
Your comment made me laugh in these early morning hours :-)
Glad you enjoyed this piece, thanks heaps!
Glad you enjoyed this piece, thanks heaps!
Re. Black Velveteen
8th Mar 2024 8:37pm
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9th Mar 2024 6:33am
Re. Black Velveteen
9th Mar 2024 3:20pm
Thanks for the education; never knew all your amazing observations. Hugs and peace, Oral
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Re: Re. Black Velveteen
9th Mar 2024 3:55pm
Thanks heaps for your comment, Oral.
I'm quite an observer, you sensed that right :-)
I'm quite an observer, you sensed that right :-)
Re. Black Velveteen
9th Mar 2024 3:26pm
Superb style, obviously it's time to spice up our weekly textile get-together here in Portugal :) (and welcome back - really glad to see you again. Best regards, Josh)
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Re: Re. Black Velveteen
9th Mar 2024 3:55pm
So glad you like this one, Josh.
Your weekly textile get together gave me huge smiles. Good luck with spicing them up :-)
Also: it's good to be back. Warm regards, Duende
Your weekly textile get together gave me huge smiles. Good luck with spicing them up :-)
Also: it's good to be back. Warm regards, Duende
Re. Black Velveteen
9th Mar 2024 7:56pm
Black is the color of sensual sunshine and moody lust ....
Phenomenal write
BIG L
Phenomenal write
BIG L
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Re: Re. Black Velveteen
10th Mar 2024 7:28am
Phenomenal even, can't ask for more!
...You described black to a tee.
As always, I appreciate your thoughts :-)
...You described black to a tee.
As always, I appreciate your thoughts :-)