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Helping Hand
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Helping Hand
You're a budding rose
I'm a withered aging plant
Help me see the light
Written by
Vision_of_insanity
Published
5th Mar 2024
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#aging
#flowers
#haiku
#motivational
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Re. Helping Hand
Thor_Azine
5th Mar 2024 11:55am
Staring as she blooms
Dying slow in the shadow
Of admiration
Grab your own sun and the light will shine on its own.
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Vision_of_insanity
5th Mar 2024 11:57am
Correct. Nice haiku. Post it.
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Re. Helping Hand
deliabear
(Debbie)
5th Mar 2024 3:09pm
We need our people to help us see the light sometimes.
I def feel the withered part, lol
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Vision_of_insanity
5th Mar 2024 3:31pm
We all feel withered from time and time again. Thanks for your response to this. Appreciate it.
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Re. Helping Hand
Anonymous
6th Mar 2024 11:38pm
With a litte help from my friends... awesome write 🥰💯❤️🫂
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Vision_of_insanity
6th Mar 2024 11:41pm
That's basically the entire concept. Thanks for reading & commenting.
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