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The Dark
The thick dark atmosphere
is needless of a shred of sleep.
The dark was too deeply conscious
of me.
The dark's thoughts were becoming
mine.
I can feel the weakness of my mind.
In a bizarre solitude was the heavy pull
of the ancient trees.
Whatever is looking at me.
Intensely slicing through me.
A stare that pierces flesh, blood, organ & bone
I stand mortal and alone.
But deep within my soul's energy,
is a galaxy of iridescent scars
The gashes of my identity.
I'm safe.
The dark retreats.
For now.
The dark already knows the how.
is needless of a shred of sleep.
The dark was too deeply conscious
of me.
The dark's thoughts were becoming
mine.
I can feel the weakness of my mind.
In a bizarre solitude was the heavy pull
of the ancient trees.
Whatever is looking at me.
Intensely slicing through me.
A stare that pierces flesh, blood, organ & bone
I stand mortal and alone.
But deep within my soul's energy,
is a galaxy of iridescent scars
The gashes of my identity.
I'm safe.
The dark retreats.
For now.
The dark already knows the how.
Author's Note
The dark is conscious of us all.
Let your scars shine.
Let your scars shine.
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Re. The Dark
3rd Mar 2024 00:05am
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3rd Mar 2024 1:45am
Re. The Dark
3rd Mar 2024 00:16am
I needed this, thanks to my recent 2nd degree burn. Thanks for the perspective.
Very favorite line: "The dark was too deeply conscious of me"
Very favorite line: "The dark was too deeply conscious of me"
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3rd Mar 2024 1:47am
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3rd Mar 2024 1:10am
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3rd Mar 2024 2:31am
I do try sleeping at night but am often in my deepest sleep at around 9am when most folk are probably already up or at work. I never was a 'morning person' anyway! ;-)
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3rd Mar 2024 8:02am
Re. The Dark
3rd Mar 2024 2:54am
The dark recedes like tides of the ocean
we know it will return...
I'm totally in tune with this, Debbie..
Thank you for sharing.
we know it will return...
I'm totally in tune with this, Debbie..
Thank you for sharing.
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3rd Mar 2024 8:04am
Thank you so much, I like what you wrote
I picture a dark beach.
I really believe to know the light, you must first know the dark
I picture a dark beach.
I really believe to know the light, you must first know the dark
Re. The Dark
3rd Mar 2024 9:52am
Re. The Dark
3rd Mar 2024 10:25am
Brilliant.
That last line reverberates.
I believe that you are right. We must know darkness before we can know light. Your words always carry such wisdom.
That last line reverberates.
I believe that you are right. We must know darkness before we can know light. Your words always carry such wisdom.
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3rd Mar 2024 10:35am
Thank you so much
It's wisdom born from pain. Sometimes that's where the strongest wisdom
comes from.
It's wisdom born from pain. Sometimes that's where the strongest wisdom
comes from.
Re. The Dark
3rd Mar 2024 11:56am
Brilliant. Well executed and your message shines through the darkness.
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3rd Mar 2024 12:18pm
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2024 7:22pm
Give darkness energy & it will take until it's gone. Perfect reminder that it's not a permanent state.
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4th Mar 2024 8:41pm