elemental

hubbing from 'basshead' - that is automatically a connected-to-everything type of music to start with, then touching on all the elements to a life-story... very cool. [:

i might be being dense here, but

"perhaps will passing these" didn't seem to connect to itself or the 'tapestry' line. did i miss something, or is there a word missing maybe?

ah yes "will" was spose to be "while". thank ya... for some reason i remembered a few of these lines of something i tried putting to music years ago, and wrapped the rest of this around it

"Artfag"?  Sounds like someone else visits 4chan.

The entire 2nd stanza was fantastic, especially the last 2 lines, fat-capped aerosol.  The third stanza was very concise and conceptually wonderful  Great job, man.

thanks P the M...ya know the "artfag" hmmm..well im aware of 4chan, but I have used the term since I was a kid. I was gonna put an endnote explaining that the term artfag could be offensive, but decided against it (as I am well aware of the sensitivities around here), but the term is meant as no more offensive than "hipster", regardless of how the strings of the word fag might pull.(it is a common term referring to a subculture of sorts and Im not sure how much it is used outside of my local dialect?)..I would describe myself as artfag or at least art-curious, and it has nothing to do w my sexual orientation.

Yeah, on 4chan (which I frequent) fag is pretty much just put on the end of anything.  Like I would be a writefag and a Utahfag and, of course, it means nothing offensive, just a saying.

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you are so amazing w words.