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Force of nature!
Its soothing touch, it breathed into my very pores
in its nurcher, fed and clothed, kept me warm.
When I wandered lost, whispered as it held me close
fought with demons, fended with each root and branch
and watercourse, rekindled me thro grief and depression`s
vale, I hold its wonderment and precious smiles detail
in its nurcher, fed and clothed, kept me warm.
When I wandered lost, whispered as it held me close
fought with demons, fended with each root and branch
and watercourse, rekindled me thro grief and depression`s
vale, I hold its wonderment and precious smiles detail
Published 22nd Feb 2024
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22nd Feb 2024 2:58pm
Nature has a way of doing that and enjoys being honored for it through poetry such as this.
I would encourage you to double-check your punctuation and capitalization for consistency.
I would encourage you to double-check your punctuation and capitalization for consistency.
23rd Feb 2024 5:16pm
Slipalong - The learned say the Earth is 4500 millions of years old. We, human beings, have been here for only 7. We are just a tiny echo of a faint whisper in the thunder of Time. Nature has had a lot of practice healing with that “soothing touch.” Nice work slipalong. Namyh
24th Feb 2024 8:49am
We owe it so much, and thanks for your appreciatve comments. written for a DU competition, describe natute max 6 lines
24th Feb 2024 7:46pm
We owe it so much, and thanks for your appreciatve comments. written for a DU competition, describe natute max 6 lines
regards SLIP
regards SLIP
