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In quiet circumambience
After work, I sit at home
and decompress,
influenced by the ambiance.
I take my hair down, in the stillness
I draw from my cigarette,
a smoke ring floats above me, in quiet dance.
Published 20th Feb 2024
| Edited 21st Feb 2024
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20th Feb 2024 3:20pm
This reminds me of my favorite time in the evening, when the supper dishes are washed, my grandson has gone home, and it's so quiet I can hear myself breathe. . .and think.
21st Feb 2024 12:21pm
Just think; most people only think they're thinking. ;) Sounds like a tranquil moment indeed. When I get home from a 12-hour shift from driving, my mind is still winding from the road with a raddle that started around midnight. lol, there's a lot of noise out there.
