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my heart's desire
my heart's desire
and wants,
so emotional
within itself,
longing
for happiness,
what
shall i do,
scold a heart
for feeling?
and wants,
so emotional
within itself,
longing
for happiness,
what
shall i do,
scold a heart
for feeling?
Published 16th Feb 2024
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16th Feb 2024 3:43am
hello dearest Wolf we can't change what the heart feels
we can either encourage the feeling or not great write 💕
we can either encourage the feeling or not great write 💕
16th Feb 2024 4:31am
16th Feb 2024 9:46am
I'm all for feeling.
Although, hearts can be demanding, lol
Most people want to not feel.
Nice write.
Although, hearts can be demanding, lol
Most people want to not feel.
Nice write.
16th Feb 2024 9:50am
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Anonymous
18th Feb 2024 4:35pm
That longing unmet can weigh so much. That last stanza is the perfect ending
18th Feb 2024 6:00pm
