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Something So Deep.........
Why'd you have to take me there?
You start the fire, then you put it out
I have to depend on my imagination
I didn't want to fade what you've been puttin' down
But then you say the word then I go under.......(Chaka Khan)
When I'm inside you
giving you the best of my love
the best my body can give
Grinding, spell binding
trying so hard to feel the bottom,
the depths of your ocean......my toes can't touch it
(and no other part of me......)
Something so deep baby
drowning in your ocean
caught up in your
“loco-motions”........
…..encamped inside
your walls of deep rouge, wrapped up tightly
swept along
the undercurrent
of your intrepid waters
Grinding
spellbinding
trying to reach the very bottom
to savor the very last drop of your "coffee"..........
…....something so deep
You start the fire, then you put it out
I have to depend on my imagination
I didn't want to fade what you've been puttin' down
But then you say the word then I go under.......(Chaka Khan)
When I'm inside you
giving you the best of my love
the best my body can give
Grinding, spell binding
trying so hard to feel the bottom,
the depths of your ocean......my toes can't touch it
(and no other part of me......)
Something so deep baby
drowning in your ocean
caught up in your
“loco-motions”........
…..encamped inside
your walls of deep rouge, wrapped up tightly
swept along
the undercurrent
of your intrepid waters
Grinding
spellbinding
trying to reach the very bottom
to savor the very last drop of your "coffee"..........
…....something so deep
Published 12th Feb 2024
Author's Note
afternoon rains flood the plains......and I'm missing u 😢
Every time you go missing you so somethin' deep
Baby come around missing you now somethin' deep.........(say it girl)
https://youtu.be/asPujnFKwZg?si=jSgRe11RU0xz3Rih
Every time you go missing you so somethin' deep
Baby come around missing you now somethin' deep.........(say it girl)
https://youtu.be/asPujnFKwZg?si=jSgRe11RU0xz3Rih
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12th Feb 2024 7:11pm
The woman in the picture appears to be in a dry bath which adds to the sense of depth the poem shows.
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- Edited 22nd Jun 2024 9:45pm
12th Feb 2024 11:02pm
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