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Casper The Ghost
It’s hard
I try to hold on
But I realize I’m grabbing sand
You keep slipping through my fingers
I try to hold on
But I realize I’m grabbing sand
You keep slipping through my fingers
Published 10th Feb 2024
Author's Note
I can’t get to her anymore. It’s like she’s fading
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10th Feb 2024 4:44am
Dear M,
I’m sorry this situation is happening for you. I think the metaphor of the sand is a great image of how it feels at the moment and I hope it will turn around.
Great writing. H🌷
I’m sorry this situation is happening for you. I think the metaphor of the sand is a great image of how it feels at the moment and I hope it will turn around.
Great writing. H🌷
10th Feb 2024 5:23am
