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Alone
Reflecting on my memories
Slowly time passes me by
Heartache never seems to ease
The reasons for my painful cry
I lie here awake and think
Is this how life will always be
Desolate stares I cannot blink
Consumed by this misery
I do not want another year
A year of the unknown
Haunting me my greatest fear
Another year where I'm alone
Slowly time passes me by
Heartache never seems to ease
The reasons for my painful cry
I lie here awake and think
Is this how life will always be
Desolate stares I cannot blink
Consumed by this misery
I do not want another year
A year of the unknown
Haunting me my greatest fear
Another year where I'm alone
Published 9th Feb 2024
| Edited 12th Nov 2024
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Palpable... the brevity of each line is a cut that bleeds... you've conveyed the pain and brutality of being alone in quite a strong fashion...
The mark of a well developing writer... Kudos.
I appreciate the stark candor.
Thank you for trusting us to share.
🌹B
Btw, Welcome to DUP.
;)
The mark of a well developing writer... Kudos.
I appreciate the stark candor.
Thank you for trusting us to share.
🌹B
Btw, Welcome to DUP.
;)
10th Feb 2024 7:55pm
Thank you for your comments..I appreciate them..and very happy to be aboard DUP..it gives a chance for imagination and creations to be shared by all which allows people to journey into different thoughts and perspectives
