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bridges burned in front of us
bridges burned in front of us
sad seahorse thoughts
the murder of roses: the
inexcusable
crime
running like rabbits in a
field of foxes
wake up in fear and
break the legs
of dawn
pour a second steaming cup
of agony
look at the space between the
stars
a reminder that there is more
blackness than
light
would that we sit by the
campfire
eyes, ears minds and
throats full of insects
sounds
praying for a biblical
rain to wash away
the boredom of our
consequences
only to discover the
dessert winds have
swallowed the last
oasis
Published 8th Feb 2024
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8th Feb 2024 4:04am
a very mournful write dearest Kitty I can relate...my only way to combat it is enjoy my existence to spite it if nothing more 💕
8th Feb 2024 11:46am
Your imagery is unparalleled.... sad seahorse thoughts are common place for me of recent, so you grabbed my attention immediately.
l like the theme of vulnerability, here... there's so much risk in so many ways, when we let our guard down; this poem really accentuates that so well, it's easily imagined in my mind's y
Truly thought provoking and exceptional ink, per usual, my dear friend.
Missed your pov and the bk essence/flair only your pen gifts us.... thanks for still being here.
Hope you've been doing well.
🌹💙 - B
l like the theme of vulnerability, here... there's so much risk in so many ways, when we let our guard down; this poem really accentuates that so well, it's easily imagined in my mind's y
Truly thought provoking and exceptional ink, per usual, my dear friend.
Missed your pov and the bk essence/flair only your pen gifts us.... thanks for still being here.
Hope you've been doing well.
🌹💙 - B
8th Feb 2024 11:50am
My dear Blue. It is so wonderful to hear from you. I cannot express how much I've missed your imput. I'm doing better. The wars are lessening.
Thank you for the comments.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the comments.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
17th Feb 2024 1:42am
Your ability to make the reader pause and reflect is astounding.
Well done.
Well done.
17th Feb 2024 6:32pm
