inadvertence; rewind

Righteous

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Lotta feeling in not too many words.
That's poetry at its best

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hello beautiful Betty hope is for dead girls I love that line this is full of power and great need I can taste you too 💕

Thank you darling

Netsuke carving.

Sometimes the best way, The Bet' Way, is the direct route.

Eh, and sometimes there is no way

As usual, blown away.
I loved how you repeated the first stanza near the end and that last line? Amazing impact. I agree with PS, so much said in a short poem. You capture the primal need in wanting to recapture romance and lust perfectly with word choices (obviously) and your unique formatting.
Girl, I can never get enough. You write what we all feel or have felt with such ferocity and exactly the way it FEELS. A unique gift and I’m thankful you can put into poetry what so many of us have gone through. Your work heals.

Sigh…. It heals anyone but me.

Thank you my friend

The design of your poem is really done well, circling the emotion back around to capture us all once again. Really strong writing!

Thanks man

In the words of the great Poetspeak...Big Like. :)

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Protect ya neck

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Dear B,

You write heartache within lust like nobody’s business. That yearning next to loss and need is powerfully potent.
Makes my heart do something which is more than it’s done in ages. Outstanding write. H🌷

Thank you my friend