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second sight
"Mama,
the sun is
in my eyes,
I am blinded!"
"That's okay
my child,
it is far better
not to see the
world for what
it really is."
Published 6th Feb 2024
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8th Feb 2024 5:27am
Dear BK,
Ain’t that the truth! Lately I’ve likened myself to an ostrich with my head buried in the sand very contentedly. The less I know the better. Your poem supports my thoughts 😉 Marvelous insight as always. H🌷
Ain’t that the truth! Lately I’ve likened myself to an ostrich with my head buried in the sand very contentedly. The less I know the better. Your poem supports my thoughts 😉 Marvelous insight as always. H🌷
8th Feb 2024 11:53am
The only thing is an ostrich can't see what is sneaking up on them with their head stuck in the sand, lol.
Thank you, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
17th Feb 2024 1:24am
17th Feb 2024 6:31pm
Binders, blinders, blinder until we are sightless.
Thank you, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
17th Feb 2024 1:27am
it's the one behind the scenes that troubles me... when everyone is behaving the same way it is likely him inspiring the treatment you're getting...is there escaping this I don't think so and a flowery place will not erase what my mind has known here... great write...
17th Feb 2024 6:34pm
