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Revive
Your fingers grazed
with nimble ease.
Like the sudden wealth
of a summer breeze.
Such delight abandoned
upon my yearning delicate skin.
Unsolvable.
The place you end & I begin.
In the celestial mind,
in untapped ancient silence .
A single heart divides
Possibility nascent.
It's been easy to breathe
and not feel alive.
Now my chest wildly thumps,
blood bubbling and revived.
with nimble ease.
Like the sudden wealth
of a summer breeze.
Such delight abandoned
upon my yearning delicate skin.
Unsolvable.
The place you end & I begin.
In the celestial mind,
in untapped ancient silence .
A single heart divides
Possibility nascent.
It's been easy to breathe
and not feel alive.
Now my chest wildly thumps,
blood bubbling and revived.
Author's Note
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6th Feb 2024 1:15pm
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6th Feb 2024 2:03pm
Your author's note said it perfectly.
Easy reading...
I agree.
Much respect
Naaj
Easy reading...
I agree.
Much respect
Naaj
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6th Feb 2024 2:30pm
Hey there, I really liked your last post too.
Thank you so much for stopping bye.
Thank you so much for stopping bye.
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6th Feb 2024 5:00pm
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2024 6:50pm
Warmed the morning beautifully!

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6th Feb 2024 7:21pm
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
7th Feb 2024 9:46am
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Re. Revive
7th Feb 2024 10:58am
I love when I can make special people smile, thanks!
I'm a bit behind on reading posts.
Have a fabulous day & smile even more!!!
I'm a bit behind on reading posts.
Have a fabulous day & smile even more!!!
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7th Feb 2024 11:06am
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17th Feb 2024 00:24am
Hi Debbie,
Love your rhymes.. and the hidden meaning! Great job!
~Christopher
Love your rhymes.. and the hidden meaning! Great job!
~Christopher
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17th Feb 2024 00:52am