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Hell's Vine
My clammy cheek was plastered
on the cold slab of rock bottom.
Does it matter how I got here?
Dry heaving my suffocating fear.
Numb blaze & flames of yesterday.
Haunted holograms
of my contorted mistakes
Harrowing hieroglyphic accounts
adorning the ancient brain.
A story for when the soul no longer remains.
Lost souls saunter a star perished night.
Shivering with the grim fright,
that there might not exist a welcoming light.
Lifeless I lay & glimpse
a pinhole of fragile shine.
Proofless that it is divine.
But hopeful it's a tiny sign.
My claws extend
to climb hell's vine.
on the cold slab of rock bottom.
Does it matter how I got here?
Dry heaving my suffocating fear.
Numb blaze & flames of yesterday.
Haunted holograms
of my contorted mistakes
Harrowing hieroglyphic accounts
adorning the ancient brain.
A story for when the soul no longer remains.
Lost souls saunter a star perished night.
Shivering with the grim fright,
that there might not exist a welcoming light.
Lifeless I lay & glimpse
a pinhole of fragile shine.
Proofless that it is divine.
But hopeful it's a tiny sign.
My claws extend
to climb hell's vine.
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Re. Hell's Vine
4th Feb 2024 5:07pm
This really is one of your darker writes. That whole first stanza is awesome. I have to give this one a like and RL add.
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I was afraid maybe the darkness would not go over well. I'm the one laying on that slab of rock bottom and I really did claw my way up. Clawing my way up again.
Thank you for checking out!!!!and for reading list!
Thank you for checking out!!!!and for reading list!
Re. Hell's Vine
4th Feb 2024 5:11pm
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4th Feb 2024 6:41pm
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Thanks so much for checking out and not thinking I'm a freak of the darkness,, lol haha
Re. Hell's Vine
4th Feb 2024 6:18pm
So well written. The darkness pours out of this poem. Nicely executed Debbie!!
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4th Feb 2024 6:42pm
Oh I like to hear that.
Makes me want to go darker, lol
Thank so much for your continued support
Makes me want to go darker, lol
Thank so much for your continued support
Re. Hell's Vine
4th Feb 2024 6:56pm
ooh I love it beautiful Debbie you really got me with the ending I wasn't expecting that 💕
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4th Feb 2024 7:32pm
I love the unexpected. That's kind of my life story many times over. Thank you for reading my beautiful friend. 🖤
Re. Hell's Vine
4th Feb 2024 10:55pm
You always have at least one line per poem that really gets me. This time it's "A story for when the soul no longer remains."
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5th Feb 2024 1:03am
Hi! That's such a nice comment. I like that line too.
Thx so much for your continued support.
Have a great night! 🌙
Thx so much for your continued support.
Have a great night! 🌙
Re. Hell's Vine
5th Feb 2024 3:38am
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5th Feb 2024 4:55am
I know, this one was a bit crazy, lol
Thank you for reading!
Goodnight my friend
Thank you for reading!
Goodnight my friend
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2024 3:50pm
Those little glows are vital to keep us moving in a positive direction. This is an incredible piece!
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5th Feb 2024 4:10pm
Thank you so much. I believe no matter how dark light can be found.
Thx for checking out.
Thx for checking out.
Re. Hell's Vine
5th Feb 2024 8:39pm
I had visions of erotica from the outset, reading this. Maybe it was the cheeks, lol! ;-)
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5th Feb 2024 8:44pm
Haha. If you enjoyed it, I'm glad.
Maybe a person 🤔 is most erotic when they have hit rock bottom, lol.
Thx for checking out!
Maybe a person 🤔 is most erotic when they have hit rock bottom, lol.
Thx for checking out!
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5th Feb 2024 8:56pm
... or if they've had one or two glasses of wine too many maybe? Lol. You rock whatever you write. Not sure hitting rock bottom is erotic... however, the only way is UP, they say! ;-)
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5th Feb 2024 9:58pm
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Re. Hell's Vine
7th Feb 2024 11:23am
As I’ve said before girl, your darkness illuminates.
Holding you in thought, as always.
Holding you in thought, as always.
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7th Feb 2024 11:47am
Thank you so much.
Still got a little glitter in the dark parts of me......
At one time I felt like rock bottom was a height, I was that low. Now it's a different kind of pain. Thank you for caring so much. ❤️
Still got a little glitter in the dark parts of me......
At one time I felt like rock bottom was a height, I was that low. Now it's a different kind of pain. Thank you for caring so much. ❤️
Re. Hell's Vine
9th Feb 2024 10:40am
Hello Deliabear, how are you; First time readin your work... nice writing, very enjoyable read. Take good care
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Re. Hell's Vine
9th Feb 2024 10:53am
Hello! I'm looking forward to reading more of you too.
Thanks for checking me out and nice comment.
Hope to see you more 😊
Thanks for checking me out and nice comment.
Hope to see you more 😊