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Embracing Self
independence sprouts from a seed
that wants to be rid of its shell
it wants to burst out from its pod
to be out to live away from the cell
growing up and fending for oneself
is where the self-reliance starts to grow
like a life where everything seems personal
yet being able to reflect every glow
the thought of wanting to be free
from the shackles of norm
from every regiment that used to be
shouts for the need for independence
relying on oneself allows learning and growth
to push and enjoy capabilities discovered
and many possibilities yet to be known
if one dares for potentials to be unleashed
And I stand here a testament
of ambitions falling short of expectations
that wants to be rid of its shell
it wants to burst out from its pod
to be out to live away from the cell
growing up and fending for oneself
is where the self-reliance starts to grow
like a life where everything seems personal
yet being able to reflect every glow
the thought of wanting to be free
from the shackles of norm
from every regiment that used to be
shouts for the need for independence
relying on oneself allows learning and growth
to push and enjoy capabilities discovered
and many possibilities yet to be known
if one dares for potentials to be unleashed
And I stand here a testament
of ambitions falling short of expectations
Author's Note
Hindsight is 20/20
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Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 2:16am
Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 3:55am
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5th Feb 2024 5:20am
Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 5:55am
Dear G,
I enjoyed the energy in this poem and the testament to personal growth. The closing lines are stellar. Relatable and inspirational. Wonderful piece. H🌷
I enjoyed the energy in this poem and the testament to personal growth. The closing lines are stellar. Relatable and inspirational. Wonderful piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 6:12am
Dear H, so kind of you to drop by and leave your comments. Appreciate you as always.
Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 11:20am
There's a particular kind of wisdom we can only see in that rearview mirror, r that's for sure. I'm taken completely with the uplifting sense of self-reliance, ambition and hopefulness that you inspire
Live your dreams, as best as you can as hard as you can everyday. Because it's all so fleeting.
Thank you for this one,, Grace.
It hit home.
🌹B
Live your dreams, as best as you can as hard as you can everyday. Because it's all so fleeting.
Thank you for this one,, Grace.
It hit home.
🌹B
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Re: Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 11:35am
Yes dear Blue, life is too short to be miserable and unkind. Life is too short not to dream. Thank you for dropping by and reading. Appreciate you as always.
Re. Embracing Self
5th Feb 2024 5:12pm
Expectations are an invitation to disappointment.
This is very much the universal story of us all....rates of acceptance may vary.
This is very much the universal story of us all....rates of acceptance may vary.
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Re. Embracing Self
17th Feb 2024 00:53am
Reflective pieces always offer a true understanding of ourselves. You've done a great job here offering the reader a little hindsight for everyone as well.
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17th Feb 2024 2:15am