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My Butterfly
in the meadows beauty divine
a pretty butterfly fluttered by
her feelers touched define
who she wished to occupy
kisses each blooms she chose
land on every petals daintily
offered a charming sight up close
she kissed and embraced delightfully
Lovers of all unkind to none
spreads equally her pheromones
a pretty butterfly fluttered by
her feelers touched define
who she wished to occupy
kisses each blooms she chose
land on every petals daintily
offered a charming sight up close
she kissed and embraced delightfully
Lovers of all unkind to none
spreads equally her pheromones
Published 3rd Feb 2024
Author's Note
Written for Adagio's competition.
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2024 1:20am
Beautiful❤
3rd Feb 2024 1:54am
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2024 2:17am
It's a pleasure 😊
N yeahh it's dimpy 😸
N yeahh it's dimpy 😸
3rd Feb 2024 2:28am
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2024 2:13pm
Thank you for your lovely compliment...
3rd Feb 2024 2:36am
It's amazing how delicate & stunning butterflies are. You have obviously captured this fact to great effect within these words. I cannot understand though how something so fragile can fly thousands of miles & not sustain damage doing so, ya know? 😊
3rd Feb 2024 3:52am
They are light and graceful, delicate but sure. They mind their own business too😊nobody wants to slap them
3rd Feb 2024 8:07am
3rd Feb 2024 9:48am
7th Feb 2024 4:28pm
You are a very social butterfly who needs to spread her wings. Keep on writing.
7th Feb 2024 5:40pm
