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Paradise
I find tranquility upon the stones
Quiet memories through the departed
History comes alive in a graveyard
Birds find sanctuary among the tombs
Faded epitaphs from centuries back
Wild vines wrapped around crypts long ago
People need to respect one another
Loneliness on earth will follow you down.
Quiet memories through the departed
History comes alive in a graveyard
Birds find sanctuary among the tombs
Faded epitaphs from centuries back
Wild vines wrapped around crypts long ago
People need to respect one another
Loneliness on earth will follow you down.
Published 31st Jan 2024
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31st Jan 2024 9:49pm
31st Jan 2024 10:16pm
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
31st Jan 2024 10:42pm
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31st Jan 2024 11:34pm
1st Feb 2024 3:02am
Your descriptive lines made this a very interesting write. Not too dark or morbid, thankfully. I like how it reads matter of factly, actually. Adding the vines was perfect, by the way. A sort of clinging, without saying it.
Great write.
Great write.
1st Feb 2024 10:54am
1st Feb 2024 9:58pm
Hi Keith,
Tranquility among the stones
Quiet memories of the departed
Can you imagine all the stories if the dead could speak? I would listen. Brilliant poem took me to a place where I could settle in. Well done🙏
Tranquility among the stones
Quiet memories of the departed
Can you imagine all the stories if the dead could speak? I would listen. Brilliant poem took me to a place where I could settle in. Well done🙏
1st Feb 2024 10:14pm
