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Philosophical Tides - with Adagio
Of shallows in the deep end of my heart
under the winds of philosophical tides
that draws the emptiness close
fingers of memories trace your shadow
with the tears falling from my eyes
listening to the depths of your love
sewn to my soul
Depths of love embraced vulnerability
all encased in trust and understanding
into the deepness of the soul’s abyss
translated in light of passion
from the deep dark brown eyes
giving all the strength of its sublime root
and then fall like confetti on barren ground
Author's Note
Honing writing skills. Thank you Adagio for the collaboration
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Re. Philosophical Tides - with Adagio
Often life brings challenges and then the inevitable takes things away. Thank you my friend for letting me scribble.
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30th Jan 2024 1:14am
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30th Jan 2024 1:13am
Amen to that:) life can be unpredictable, but hey, lets live as life intends us to do eh. Always be awesome, Billy.
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30th Jan 2024 1:15am
I want to live as I intend to, lol but you knew I'd say something smart. Thank you. 😉
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Re. Philosophical Tides - with Adagio
16th Feb 2024 5:44pm
Like pieces to a puzzle, these parts come together and flow very nicely.
Awesome spill.
Awesome spill.
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