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For You, Always
This is my greatest happiness,
to spend my life with you.
Sharing trials and triumphs,
joy's & problems too.
To kiss you in the morning,
and hold you close at night.
To know we'll be together,
Whether days are grey or bright.
Sharing all the things,
that make our daily life.
This is my greatest happiness,
when I stab you with this knife.
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to spend my life with you.
Sharing trials and triumphs,
joy's & problems too.
To kiss you in the morning,
and hold you close at night.
To know we'll be together,
Whether days are grey or bright.
Sharing all the things,
that make our daily life.
This is my greatest happiness,
when I stab you with this knife.
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Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 11:02am
Fuck!
(Can I say that?)
What you did at the end…I’d have appreciated a warning. No, just kidding. That was somehow magical in its darkness.
(Can I say that?)
What you did at the end…I’d have appreciated a warning. No, just kidding. That was somehow magical in its darkness.
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Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 11:05am
I was going to go with another romantic poem just like the last one you read but I said nah at the very end. Too many of the same type of poems becomes stale and redundant. I try & change my writing up as much as possible.
Love your comments though. You're the best!!
Love your comments though. You're the best!!
Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 11:15am
Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 11:34am
Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 11:49am
I'm see a pattern, lol. But I'm greatly enjoying it. I knew your ending was up to something.
I love a jawdropper
I love a jawdropper
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Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 11:53am
Thank you Debbie. I always appreciate you taking the time and reading my poems.
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27th Jan 2024 4:08pm
Re. For You, Always
27th Jan 2024 3:48pm
We like that ending but think of it sexually, like trying to enter her without warning predawn. It's really great sex and surprising for her as well. Tight work dude
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27th Jan 2024 4:09pm