Questionable existence

Wow! That was, wow, really really good.
I love the questions incorporating all the senses.
I'm going to love your writing......

Thank you for reading and enjoying this. Your awesome!

I appreciate that. Thank you!!

well done

Thank you!!

Thank you very much.

Provoking write… welcome to DUP…

I appreciate the feedback. Thank you. Glad to be here.

I love the line, 'Can you taste what I'm hearing?' This write feels like art too, if art could be written.

Thanks Billy_Snagg. Appreciate the comment.

Seeing that I've already swam a few strokes in your poetic pool of thought, it is interesting to go to your (or anyone's) 'origin story' here on DUP; take the temperature, so to speak. Getting a glimpse into the mindset, is such a treat and so helpful to gain insight, not just for any newcomer but for me, the long time member, too. It's a symbiotic give and take of ideas, encouragement and hopefully motivational inspiration.

I love the ideas that you play with in this one, interchanging dreams and reality; questioning one's own reason for being, essentially the entire world around us. Is this a plane of existence that's sustainable.... is there something more?
All these thoughts come to mind, for me... amongst many others. That's pretty impressive for such a succinctly structured piece!

Thanks for finding us here, my new friend.
Don't give up on the Deep Underground. It might frustrate you at times but there's something to be said for quality vs quantity!

I look forward to diving into more, as long as my chameleon life affords me the time to do so!

🌹B

Thank you so much for diving into my back catalog. (I've been here a mere 8 days!) I agree with your statement. I appreciate the support and admiration you have for my work. Your an amazing asset to me, others and DUP. Look forward to ready many many more of your writings.
xo
Keith

My ex wife reminds me I exist every fucking day 😒 great writing though 🤘

Damn ex-wives! I feel for you.
Thanks for the feedback!

We could dream of each other! Right next to each other! I really liked this! Wanted to check out your first poem here. Really good

Thank you ASD. I wrote much different in the early poems next to what I say now. I was more conservative and timid.
Thank you my wonderful friend!