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You...
you are
not a gentleman
I always feel
wildness
between my legs...
you never
kissed me gently
I always feel
intense hunger
on my boobs...
not a gentleman
I always feel
wildness
between my legs...
you never
kissed me gently
I always feel
intense hunger
on my boobs...
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20th Jan 2024 4:32pm
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21st Jan 2024 2:46am
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21st Jan 2024 4:37am
Sounds like we would get along just fine! Probably why we found each other on this site!
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20th Jan 2024 5:24pm
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2024 6:25pm
There's much flair and fervor in the way you write, Dimpy.
. I can almost see a fire in your eyes underlining this. That come-hither stare that causes a rush of adrenaline.
I can feel it.
Good one.
. I can almost see a fire in your eyes underlining this. That come-hither stare that causes a rush of adrenaline.
I can feel it.
Good one.
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21st Jan 2024 2:44am
There is a lot hidden in my eyes Tim.. fire, tears and lust... Well thanks for adorning my words in RL..
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20th Jan 2024 8:07pm
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20th Jan 2024 11:37pm
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Anonymous
21st Jan 2024 4:08pm
Gentlemanly behavior is for beyond the bedroom door. In intimate realms the wild is beautiful!
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21st Jan 2024 4:26pm
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29th Jan 2024 11:17am
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29th Jan 2024 1:22pm
You might like this poem of mine, before your appearance here perhaps ....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/419596-animal-tendencies/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/419596-animal-tendencies/
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29th Jan 2024 1:55pm
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14th Apr 2024 9:13am
Hot visualisable piece. He sounds clearly like a bit of wild. The second verse - oh what passion on his part!
you never
kissed me gently
I always feel
intense hunger
on my boobs...
you never
kissed me gently
I always feel
intense hunger
on my boobs...
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14th Apr 2024 5:49pm