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Winter's Secrets
" Those who don't believe in magic, will never find it" -
Roald Dahl
A magical glimpse at winter's secrets.
Behold the mysterious footprints
upon the frozen powder's bed.
It's the words we don't say
that amplify the ached silence in my head.
The soft tracks lure imagination
with their ghostly glow.
At the scene earlier, a blood red cardinal
perched in the stark white snow.
Another peaceful moment of heart glow.
Winter's startling secrets grant joy
May the return to reality be forever slow.
Roald Dahl
A magical glimpse at winter's secrets.
Behold the mysterious footprints
upon the frozen powder's bed.
It's the words we don't say
that amplify the ached silence in my head.
The soft tracks lure imagination
with their ghostly glow.
At the scene earlier, a blood red cardinal
perched in the stark white snow.
Another peaceful moment of heart glow.
Winter's startling secrets grant joy
May the return to reality be forever slow.
Author's Note
Have a magical day ✨
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Re. Winter's Secrets
18th Jan 2024 12:47pm
This is so lovely! I just researched the Red Cardinal bird as I didn't know of their existence until now. It must have been a truly magical, peaceful scene. 🙏
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18th Jan 2024 1:31pm
Thank you. Cardinals can be seen in most places in our country. The male is bright red and the female is brown with a red belly & head. Leave it to the male to show off, haha.
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Re. Winter's Secrets
18th Jan 2024 4:36pm
this is beautiful Debbie we don't get red cardnials here but we get little blackbirds set against the foggy sky...barn owls and hawks I love birds they are magic of nature 💕
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18th Jan 2024 4:47pm
We get those little black starlings, I love them. Owls, hawks. To me the cardinal is a sacred messenger from the spirit world. I'm glad you enjoyed. You always see the beauty in the world the way I do. Thank you!
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18th Jan 2024 4:38pm
hi lovely one this is pure bliss I can feel the magic here and just see in my mind's eye your beautiful red cardinal I would always be on the lookout for feathers she left behind while on my walks I love incorporating something natural in art 💕
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18th Jan 2024 4:49pm
I feel I write best about nature. The Cardinals are so striking here, like blood in snow.
Thank you for your dear comments! ❤️
Thank you for your dear comments! ❤️
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18th Jan 2024 6:15pm
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18th Jan 2024 6:52pm
Nice writing. I can put myself into some of the scenery you depict, as well as the feeling it invokes. Your use of language to describe some of your conviction, and how it relates to what your sharing is quite creative and expressive as always. Anyway, I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
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18th Jan 2024 9:02pm
This IS truly magical.
A couple winters ago I snapped the best pic of a cardinal sitting on a naked tree branch while it was snowing. The contrast was amazing.
I adore your poetry, girl.
A couple winters ago I snapped the best pic of a cardinal sitting on a naked tree branch while it was snowing. The contrast was amazing.
I adore your poetry, girl.
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19th Jan 2024 2:19am
That does sound amazing. My brother takes like National Geographic like pictures of birds. He has a really good camera to zoom in on the birds. Anyway, thank you so much!
Sweet dreams girl
Sweet dreams girl
Re. Winter's Secrets
18th Jan 2024 10:44pm
I love it. My interpretation was way off. I thought the poem was about a relationship that ended in violence and the weather was symbolic of the different experiences in a relationship. Great writing all the same.
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19th Jan 2024 2:22am
That's kind of cool the way you interpreted it, I like that. I tend to interpret poems in my own way too.
So nice to see you around & thank you!
So nice to see you around & thank you!
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Anonymous
18th Jan 2024 11:03pm
Someone said it's good luck to see a cardinal in winter, can't remember who though. The beauty & contrast between snow & cardinal is truly magical!

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Re: Re. Winter's Secrets
19th Jan 2024 2:25am
Around here, people say cardinals are messengers from heaven. Like an angel visiting. Or good luck.
I'm a bird nerd, lol, I could watch them at the feeder all day.
Thanks so much for checking out!
I'm a bird nerd, lol, I could watch them at the feeder all day.
Thanks so much for checking out!