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Life Shield, a Thimble
my life has been profound
compactly simple like a thimble
small but experiences abound
memories' thread sewed in time
dreams were carefully spun
thimbles in actions simply worn
against hurtful words acted on
pricked and hurt humble minds
small gestures akin to a thimble
to ensure against offence
life and living always assert
hearts offended, Souls be hurt.
compactly simple like a thimble
small but experiences abound
memories' thread sewed in time
dreams were carefully spun
thimbles in actions simply worn
against hurtful words acted on
pricked and hurt humble minds
small gestures akin to a thimble
to ensure against offence
life and living always assert
hearts offended, Souls be hurt.
Published 17th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Thoughts evoked by a competition
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17th Jan 2024 9:41pm
17th Jan 2024 9:44pm
Thank you for dropping by and reading MidnightSonneteer and for the encouraging words 😊
17th Jan 2024 9:51pm
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22nd Jan 2024 2:04am
Dig how the comp theme evokes emotions and reflections without going into too many details which I found so relatable.
Nicely done
Nicely done
22nd Jan 2024 2:08am
