deepundergroundpoetry.com
someone you miss
when we ended our beginnings
to create something that was never there
(to start)
to not know left from right
wrong from right
fight or flight
(to fight)
endless nights
or so we thought
would always last forever
in another life
i hope you hear me now
to create something that was never there
(to start)
to not know left from right
wrong from right
fight or flight
(to fight)
endless nights
or so we thought
would always last forever
in another life
i hope you hear me now
Published 8th Jan 2024
Author's Note
god, i havent written a poem in so long. this is a bit lyrical but i have no idea how to write songs.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 1
comments 12
reads 317
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
8th Jan 2024 8:40pm
9th Jan 2024 2:11pm
23rd Jan 2024 11:11pm
He'll always hear you too late! His loss, I am sure. I'm glad you are not waiting for that 'other life' response. ;-)
26th Jan 2024 1:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Apr 2024 4:45pm
4th Feb 2024 8:34pm
<< post removed >>
5th Feb 2024 2:21pm
5th Feb 2024 2:28pm
to miss
the reality of chance
the concept of forever
hindered by change
yet...
the feeling...how we miss
so tangled with momentary thoughts of wish.
thank you for sharing
the reality of chance
the concept of forever
hindered by change
yet...
the feeling...how we miss
so tangled with momentary thoughts of wish.
thank you for sharing
7th Feb 2024 1:37pm
22nd Feb 2024 1:57pm
My separation seems different my heart was taken. I visit her grave time to time straighten hers an our children's up leave flower, tears, my sanity has been gone since that day.
21st Mar 2024 7:12pm
22nd Mar 2024 1:00pm
Anonymous
20th Aug 2024 7:16pm
Good one 👍
