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Love and Pain
I was always a rogue with you
Then I started to love you
Still in that phase
I wanted to see you bound
Just sitting next to me
Occasionally leaning over to twist your nipples
Hoping you'd do the same to me if I ever untied you
Yeah all kinds of bdsm pleasures
But then you got religion without the religion
That sounds weird but it's me
No matter what I say or do short of daggers
You always come back to me
To which I'm grateful
Purity has its moments
They don't last long
Winter just started
I long for your heat
Then I started to love you
Still in that phase
I wanted to see you bound
Just sitting next to me
Occasionally leaning over to twist your nipples
Hoping you'd do the same to me if I ever untied you
Yeah all kinds of bdsm pleasures
But then you got religion without the religion
That sounds weird but it's me
No matter what I say or do short of daggers
You always come back to me
To which I'm grateful
Purity has its moments
They don't last long
Winter just started
I long for your heat
Author's Note
Tribute, suffering, bound, phenomenal....
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Love and Pain
7th Jan 2024 5:55pm
Interesting take on how sadism and masochism can bleed over into daily life iand how the loyalty remains. I like the closing lines.
Phenomenal use of subtle color in the painting. That's maximizing the power of minimalism.
Phenomenal use of subtle color in the painting. That's maximizing the power of minimalism.
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7th Jan 2024 6:33pm
You got every bit of what I was trying to convey Pink. BDSM is complicated but necessary for those with commonality. It's hard sometimes to describe what you want from someone, but if there's trust it's good to just jump in the pool and see if you sink or swim. Life rafts at the ready..
I chose a painting with an aura of bondage, Grey has such a way. 50 shades not needed, a few intrinsic layers will do.
Thx for the great comment
I chose a painting with an aura of bondage, Grey has such a way. 50 shades not needed, a few intrinsic layers will do.
Thx for the great comment
Re. Love and Pain
Anonymous
7th Jan 2024 6:53pm
Strong dedication in the poetry. The artwork speaks of glimpses of color in the darkness. Great combination
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I've been fortunate to have great inspiration from this woman. We push and pull and often go forward until we Apex again. As the painting is a non-objective abstraction so is this relationship..
Thanks for your comment BB
Thanks for your comment BB
Re. Love and Pain
7th Jan 2024 6:57pm
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7th Jan 2024 7:18pm
Yes Raw
Always Raw
Primal, urban and tribal too ...
I thank you bk
Appreciate the RL greatly
Always Raw
Primal, urban and tribal too ...
I thank you bk
Appreciate the RL greatly
Re. Love and Pain
7th Jan 2024 8:14pm
Now my favorite poem of yours (and your painting is a perfect reflection of your words).
YOUR ART IS AMAZING, ALL OF IT. I feel very fortunate to be able to read and see the thoughts you choose to share with us.
Rock on, Gary.
YOUR ART IS AMAZING, ALL OF IT. I feel very fortunate to be able to read and see the thoughts you choose to share with us.
Rock on, Gary.
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Re: Re. Love and Pain
7th Jan 2024 8:34pm
Praise like that, I need to raise the bar higher.
I wonder if you will ask me about the spreader bar ?? Just kidding ..
Sadists have senses of humor too but you probably know that.
You're too kind Mary.
Art is everything to me, being able to pair both discipline is always a thrill.
Thanks for the awesome comment and RL
Appreciate
I wonder if you will ask me about the spreader bar ?? Just kidding ..
Sadists have senses of humor too but you probably know that.
You're too kind Mary.
Art is everything to me, being able to pair both discipline is always a thrill.
Thanks for the awesome comment and RL
Appreciate
Re: Re. Love and Pain
7th Jan 2024 8:40pm
Spreader bar…don’t even get me started. I’m working at purity, lol. It may not last.
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7th Jan 2024 8:49pm
Re. Love and Pain
7th Jan 2024 11:59pm
Well, this is a masterpiece...both with & without the artwork. Love the way you merge the two with your art!
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8th Jan 2024 00:03am
Love and Pain
D/s
Trust
The art is easy but tells a story here of a beautiful journey ...
I thank you and all who understand...
Appreciate you Willow
D/s
Trust
The art is easy but tells a story here of a beautiful journey ...
I thank you and all who understand...
Appreciate you Willow
Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 1:30pm
The rain on the city sidewalk
Beauty in the grey city scape.
Regards
James
Beauty in the grey city scape.
Regards
James
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8th Jan 2024 2:34pm
Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 2:53pm
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8th Jan 2024 3:02pm
Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 5:14pm
Interesting, a don't need no one type a guy needing someone. I'm digging that artwork.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 5:48pm
I think the art is moody but fitting somehow.
You know how I think by now I imagine.
Appreciate your comment and RL ....Lj
Thx
You know how I think by now I imagine.
Appreciate your comment and RL ....Lj
Thx
Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 8:39pm
Hoi hoi
Loooooove the words and the art work too.
I’ll be back tomorrow for an eieful of happiness.
See you around.
Thank you for writing and posting!
Kind regards, Gus
Loooooove the words and the art work too.
I’ll be back tomorrow for an eieful of happiness.
See you around.
Thank you for writing and posting!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 8:43pm
Really glad you like the entry Gus.
Some poems write themselves and then I choose the art to accompany them !
This one was easy as I knew this write needed some Grey overtones.
Stay tuned !
Thanks Gus
Some poems write themselves and then I choose the art to accompany them !
This one was easy as I knew this write needed some Grey overtones.
Stay tuned !
Thanks Gus
Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 9:59pm
Fuck, if that were a Rorschach I'd run screaming from the bleeding faces and penises.
I am in love with the painting. You layer really well, and the more the eye turns this around, the more we see that there is so much more to this than surface level, and I LOVE that you paired that subtlety with an overt poem. You took something like BDSM and layered it like a parfait when expressed concurrently. There is more than the eye sees. The feelings are tempered by the restraints, and the restraints are tempered by a profound sense of belonging.
The fuck!
I am in love with the painting. You layer really well, and the more the eye turns this around, the more we see that there is so much more to this than surface level, and I LOVE that you paired that subtlety with an overt poem. You took something like BDSM and layered it like a parfait when expressed concurrently. There is more than the eye sees. The feelings are tempered by the restraints, and the restraints are tempered by a profound sense of belonging.
The fuck!
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Re: Re. Love and Pain
8th Jan 2024 11:30pm
Yes, this is one of my favorite paintings.
I'm gratified by your positive response. Almost all the comments mentioned the painting in a super luxurious way for a dark moody offering. I love the color Grey and paint with it often. Wear it a lot too juxtaposed against black. It's an amazing contrast....
BDSM is so personal and loving with the right partner. Others who can't understand it, I really feel sorry for them. As in the painting it's so much about layering ....
Thanks so much for your comment, I was wondering if this would show up on your radar.
Appreciate it
The Fuck .... yes 💯
I'm gratified by your positive response. Almost all the comments mentioned the painting in a super luxurious way for a dark moody offering. I love the color Grey and paint with it often. Wear it a lot too juxtaposed against black. It's an amazing contrast....
BDSM is so personal and loving with the right partner. Others who can't understand it, I really feel sorry for them. As in the painting it's so much about layering ....
Thanks so much for your comment, I was wondering if this would show up on your radar.
Appreciate it
The Fuck .... yes 💯
Re. Love and Pain
10th Jan 2024 00:00am
Re: Re. Love and Pain
10th Jan 2024 00:06am
You know it Wally.
Little droplets of each bring home the magic in the writing so others can feel it ...
Stay tuned, my cannon is loaded .....
Thx W
Little droplets of each bring home the magic in the writing so others can feel it ...
Stay tuned, my cannon is loaded .....
Thx W
Re. Love and Pain
10th Jan 2024 1:40pm
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10th Jan 2024 1:42pm